I will comment on one or two paragraphs from the review per day. That way, I do not have to spend a lot of time at once and it will give you guys a chance to actually look at my comments and see whether or not they make sense.
Original Review - "We are okay with the wardrobe part. Actually, we are thrilled." [Comments by SS] -- Not the best usage of 'Actually', even if technically correct. 'Actually' is used to suggest something unexpected (or something that is a fact). Here, the writer simply has a change of heart. While the writer may not have expected that sudden change of heart, we do not have to be told about that. Simply stating that the writer (or writing team) is thrilled by the wardrobe would have done it. If the writer feels so compelled to write out his thought process, he or she should try something more descriptive like 'We are okay with the wardrobe. On second thoughts, let us change that opinion and say that we are actually thrilled with the wardrobe.'
And oh - there is no need for 'part' in the phrase 'wardrobe part'. It is redundant and incorrect.
Original Review - "That someone is exercising some independent thought
We are okay with the wardrobe part. Actually, we are thrilled. That someone is exercising some independent thought – why, indeed, should Lord Krishna come dressed in a dhoti and rich jewelry today instead of a Manish Malhotra ensemble?
Alas, that’s where the depth ends in Krishnarjuna.
That’s a genuine alas. What the nature of God is, no one really knows, or at least can prove –everything is a story that apparently happened eons before we were born and that we can never verify if really happened or was concocted by well-meaning and intelligent humans for the globa....